He’s Flying!!

THE LIGHTNING STRIKES AND HE GOES, FASTER STILL… 40… 50…

THE RAIN STARTS AND IT HITS HIM LIKE BULLETS…

THUNDER CRASHES ACROSS THE SKY… 60… 70…

THE CLOUDS AS BLACK AS SATIN IN THE DARK SHADOWS OF THE NIGHTS… 80…

HIS EYES CLOSE FOR AN INSTANT… 90…

LIGHTNING STRIKES NEARBY, ITS ROAR HEARD INSTANTLY IN HIS EYES AND FELT IN HIS BODY… 100

THE HAIRS ON HIS NECK STAND STRAIGHT UP ON END… 105…

HE CAN HEAR IT SCREAMING… 109…

YELLING BUT STILL FIGHTING FOR MORE… 110…

LIGHTNING STRIKES… 115… THUNDER CRASHES HIS EARDRUMS AS HE FEELS THE CHARGE… 116…

NO MORE LEFT

******BOOM******

HE LIGHTS UP IN A GLOW OF ELECTRICITY. FIRE REACHING OFF OF HIM LIKE HANDS…

HE’S FLYING…

TL Stafford

7/01/1998

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36 comments

  1. Wow, what an experience. I feel the tension building in your words as the speed rises. I love driving, but I love living more…I’m happy you survived!

  2. I think it is awesome that you see that. That is what I was hoping for. Those last words define the experience I was trying hard to write. I’m glad people can see it. My words after I read them a few times get jumbled in my head, lol…

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